Story Telling :)




“MY RIVAL IS MY LOVE”
Created By : Mutia Nurul Cahyani

One day , in Senior High School . There was two person who competed with in achievement and all thing in class are Dave and Jane . They always competed about anything .
            As today , Dave got good score in mathematics lesson and he was proud, so he ridiculed Jane .
Dave : “uhhh , Jane what a pity you are ! And I think, I could defeat you now.”
Jane : “Hahhh, Pardon me ! What a did you said ? For me it was so impossible !”
Dave : “Why not ? Now, I got one hundred in mathematics and you ? just got ninety !
Jane : “Ok, fine. I knew about it . But it was the first you got one hundred in mathematics lesson . I usually got it . Chiken  !!!”
Dave : “Uhhh, Shit !!!”
            And then Dave went with annoyed felt , Beside it Jane was happy because , she could make Dave’s shy again .
            The next day , as usually , they always disputed about score , and unimportant problem . But , they waited this day , because Mrs.Anita would to say about who is was to follow drama competition . the drama was about Snow White . And evident , Dave and Jane were selected . But there was something problem . The Snow White as Jane and the Prince as Dave .
            Certainly , that made Dave and Jane disputed , so the situation became bad . Above all when Jane said “Mrs , Did you know ? My speaking English was very well ! So I didn’t want to be his couple . And he was Loudmouth . He could say and never to do . Looser !!!”
Dave : “Did you think , I want to be your couple ? The talk Active women and so Arrogant”
Jane : “Yes , It was good , If you awared ! You were ugly man and I was beautiful so you weren’t suitable to be my couple ! Mrs, I didn’t agree if I was to be his couple !”
Dave : “Yes , I didn’t agree too.”
            Hear that , Mrs. Anita was very anry and she would not change her chose . With annoyed felt Dave and Jane could accept it .
            Three days after that , they always met , because they were a couple . But certainly , they usually disputed . And the point in time Jane Dave her first kiss to Dave by accident . Jane was shy because the accident , now she was very hate Dave and didn’t want to meet him .
            After , that Jane never came to practice her acting , and always depressed when she was at class. Dave felt guilty about it , so he went to Jane’s home to beg sorry .
Dave :”Jane , I’m so sorry about the accident , Really I never planed it , never planed to kiss you ..! Sure , I never no about it !”
Jane : “Stop...! Enough … I knew about your mind . You just want to make me shy in front of my friend . Why did you do like that to me ?”
Dave: "I swear, by god. I never intend to do that. What else to avenge! When you fall I just want to help you from nails scattered on the floor. I was afraid to nail it hurt your feet. And I do not know if all this could happen.
Jane: "really, you just want to mean to help me?"
Dave: "Yeah, and my friend also inadvertently encourage you So, from that Do you want to forgive me?"
Jane: "Ok, I'll forgive you. And thanks for your help. "
Dave: "Oh, thank's Jane. But, actually I came here because someone like me to talk about! Whereas I ... ... ... .. "
Jane: "Bring it Dave ...?"
Dave: "Ummmmm, I LOVE YOU! Do you wanna my girlfriend?
Jane: "Hahhhh,, What ....? Are you sure? Do not be kidding in this occoupation Dave! "
Dave: "I'm sure I LOVE YOU .. I do not Lie .. I liked you since we became partners in this drama. Do you wanna my girlfriend? "
Jane: "Actually, I LOVE you too Dave ..."
Dave "Oh, thank's god ... You've been granted my request. So, now you are my girlfriend? "
Jane: "Yes, Dave…"
Dave: "I promise not to bother you again and will always love you"
Jane: "I also promised to continue to love you. My rivals as my lovely ... "

And they both lived happily now as lovers now, and forever. So love can come to anyone , wherever, whenever , who believe in true love, including that of our rival.

 

 

Note: this is one of story telling which i make,,, i just a student with many false, so i need your coment for this.. thank’s before J

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